【四级作文】
Model 2 Shopping on the Net 网上购物
近来在一些发达地区出现网上购物热。
一些人喜欢网上购物。
另一些人不喜欢网上购物。
【参考范文】
Nowadays Internet is revolutionizing our world and greatly facilitating our modern life. As a matter of fact, we can do almost everything on the net. To illustrate, we can conduct E-business, advertise our products, book an air ticket, buy and sell stocks, even hunt job on the web. Recently, shopping on the Net is gradually becoming popular in modern cities. However, people take different attitudes towards the new way of shopping.
Some people who prefer shopping on the virtual shopping centers or the e-commerce portals, hold that the new way of shopping has many advantages. First ,the web-stores can keep customers updated about the best selling products. Besides, they can provide customers with a wider range of choices. Most important of all , it is very convenient and time-saving .People can stay at home shopping whatever they want online.
However, others who stick to shopping in the real –life stores have their reasons. First, they argue that though time-saving, it’s a little bit complicated to pay on the Web. Besides, they think that customers can never rest assured of the quality of the commodities unless they see them with their own eyes. Finally, they believe the best way to be on guard against the fake and poor quality commodities is to shop in the traditional way. Therefore, they don’t show any interest in shopping online. However, more and more people will prefer shopping on the Web. And it’s believed that it will eventually be an irresistible trend of shopping in the 21st century.
范文赏析：
本文属议论文。文章立题新颖，紧扣时代发展的脉搏。语言清新、流畅。思路清晰，笔墨洗练。结构完整，论述精当。
文章用现象法开篇指出因特网正在使我们的生活发生重大变化。如近来网上购物悄然兴起且日趋普及。
随后第二段开头通过论述人们对网上购物这一新生事物持两种不同态度，承上启下，自然过渡，进而引出两种不同观点：一些人认为网上购物方便省时、择物时选择面大，商品信息新颖快捷;相反另一些人则对网上购物持担心、谨慎态度。他们认为通过网上购物购买到的商品为假冒伪劣商品的可能性偏大。网上购物使人心中不托底。最后，作者分析后得出结论：网上购物这一新生事物必将成为21世纪购物发展的方向。
